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Story Coaching Services

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I love helping writers find the magic to make their stories sparkle. My critique will highlight the strengths and weaknesses of your story, and ask question that will help you dig deeper to flesh out characters and plots. Please note, I offer a critique service only and this does not address copy editing issues or proofreading (though I will sometimes mark those.) I am a multi-published author who has published with Penguin Random House, Harper Collins, and Simon & Schuster.

Are you looking for honest feedback on your manuscript?

Critique Services:

10 Page Critique - $75

I will read 10 pages of your manuscript and give you an honest critique. This will include both the strengths and weaknesses of your story and writing. There will be some inline comments, with a deliverable of a typed document detailing my feedback. 

-- Microsoft Word files, double-spaced, 12 point font

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First 3 Chapters Critique - $350

Ready to work on that submission? I will read the first three chapters of your manuscript and give you an honest critique. This will include both the strengths and weaknesses of your story and writing. There will be some inline comments, with a deliverable of a typed document detailing my feedback. 

-- Microsoft Word files, double-spaced, 12 point font, up to 50 pages

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Story Coaching - $125/hr

Need to talk out plot points or character issues? I am happy to schedule a video chat so that we can help get you on the right track. There will be no written feedback or deliverable with this service.

-- 1 hour only at a time to be scheduled one week in advance, payment due at time of booking

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Additional Information:

All payments are due before services commence. No refunds will be given. All work should be delivered in Microsoft Word files, double-spaced, 12 point font, with one inch margins. I am not an editor and will not provide copy edits or proofreading 

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Contact me to get started: harper@harperstgeorge.com

Spots are limited! Email for availability.

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